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The Sound of a Daffodil Opening: A Poem Written at Midnight in a Silent House

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The Sound of a Daffodil Opening.

Late one evening, while rereading something I had just written, I heard a faint crack from the pot of daffodils sitting on the table beside me. At first I thought I had imagined it. Then it came again. Sitting alone under a single lamp in a silent house, I realised the buds were opening. I wrote this immediately while the moment was still fresh.

The Sound of a Daffodil Opening

It’s late in the evening.

I’m alone at my table.

The house lies in darkness

save for a single lamp.

I sit wrapped in the silence,

just how I like it.

Only the distant clock —

tic… toc… tic… toc…

My hand guides the pen

back and forth across the page,

turning thoughts into words

and words into stories.

The silence breaks —

not by a neighbour’s dog

nor a passing car.

There it is again.

I stop and listen.

A tiny, fragile crack.

On the table beside me

the daffodils begin to open.

Petals stretching slowly

from their winter sleep.

I sit very still

in the circle of lamplight,

listening carefully

as one flower opens…

and then another.

There are many still to come.

Alone in the quiet

I feel quietly privileged

to hear something so small.

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